Comments : Remember My Tears

  • 12 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Wow, absolutely wonderful! Great use of words too! I loved the delicate way you used to describe such a weak thing as a teardrop.Amazing work on this, my friend.Keep it up!5/5
    Best wishes,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 12 years ago

    by LittleBlackRose

    Wow, good poem.. with great ending..

  • 12 years ago

    by John (Mr. Whuppy)

    The tears of a clown

    No one knows what pain heartache can cause unless they have been there and you obviously have

    Very well written from the heart

    5/5
    John

  • 12 years ago

    by Layla

    Oh my god. So powerful and- aww, I just wanna cry! Excellent Job on this one. definite 5.

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem really flowed with outstanding imagery and content

  • 12 years ago

    by Marcus

    Wow that was truly amazing...I never knew someone could describe a tear drop with such detail...5/5!

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda

    That is beautifully written and I think it was a very unique style of writing. A little sad but showed true feeling and I enjoyed the piece very much

  • 12 years ago

    by Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ

    Wonderfully writen and flowed great i loved this poem...it was so good! nice job 5/5

    ~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~

  • 12 years ago

    by Nelle

    Holy cow. I have nothing to say sweetie. this was BEAUTIFUL. I am COMPLETELY speechless. i just wow i LOVED LOVED IT!!!! OMGGGG =D wow ok sorry. i'll stop now..
    -whispers, WOW- hehe

  • 12 years ago

    by - xoxrachellee.;

    Ooh. i liked how you expressed the point of how much you were crying and how much you were hurt, and how you kept on repeating "remember my tears". 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Tammie

    Woah!! That is amazing! Very powerful. Your description and how you fit your words together is beautiful. Keep up the great work!
    Tammie xo

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Jessy, I did love this one, it was really good. creative and imagery was awesome
    xxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Ellie

    Beautiful imagery!

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awh! Jessy! This was so sad!!.. I hope you're alright. I be here if you need me, kay?

    Very nicely done though. I loved all the words you chose for this piece. They were perfect. I wouldn't change a thing. Keep it up! Ily. 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 12 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Thankz for participating in my contest!

  • 12 years ago

    by Connie

    This is very well written! Sad poem, but you really captured the right words to bring the poem to life.

  • 12 years ago

    by ; (Dark Angel

    I really love this poem and great ending!

  • 12 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is so very poetic, but the emotion makes you forget and just feel.I like the repitition-it adds impact and meaning.The emotion of this piece is what stands out though.

    Gary Jurechka

  • 12 years ago

    by Esther

    I like the layout, and love the title!! but i also think there is no mistakes in it! whether this is because you never made any, or because people were kind enough to tell you and then say like it is good any-way although there is only two mistakes!!

  • This is a wonderful poem, very well written! Good choice of words.
    Good job 5/5