I reallllllly like this its really good.

I liked this one, but it was kind of hard for me to follow. Not my kind of style I guess. Wonderfully writen though. Good job. =]

I really enjoyed this. Adding in '{...Remember My Tears...}' between each stanza really helps emphasize the meaning of this phrase. It also breaks the flow (in a good way!) and so is more noticable and effective. I also liked the abstract ideas and metaphors you use, particulary how they contrast with with the last line which is completely 'concrete.' Great job :)
Ariana

That was so beautiful. Absolutely inspired. Great job! And I wanted to thank you for the support in my contest. It was my first, and I appreciated it greatly. Keep up the great work! : )
~Midnight Sun

I especially liked the last two lines ,very well done ,

OoOoOo NiCe DiScRiPtIvE wOrDs!! Reading your poems makes me want to be a better writer...I loved this poem and the message it made it was amazingly good nice job keep up the good work

Amazing poem. I love all the imagery.
Great. 5/5

Wow..well since i already commented on ur newest poems i decieded to review another 3 or 4...owells i need to go check again..i would hav never thought of this..this apparently a very awsome write...keep on writing!

Beautiful poem
so intense... so lovely
touched me deep within
5/5
love
amy

Woah!!! NICE words used in the poem!! I love the flow in this poem! I gave it a 5 :) good job!

Your a really good writer i like reading your poems but i loved this one i can sorta relate to this good job maybe you can check out someof my poems ~melissaraye~

So Sweet and meaning full poem relates with cordial sadness. I love this. really... 5/5

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