by Midnight Sun Sep 16, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
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The snow covering the ground gently. |
by Mommy And Me
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Wow great way to discribe snow and spring intertwined. it has such an easy feeling or dead and alive. great work. |
by *Charisma*
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Good poem. I really liked it. One suggestion, although the word crimson is very descriptive you use it a lot. Maybe try to find a synonym for it. Just a suggestion. Jpoet* |