Buttercup Laces

by N J Thornton   Sep 17, 2006


Ashen shoes with
buttercup laces; untied.
In a skip of joyous cheeks
and a kin coloured kite.
The floor rose with fond eyes
and kissed a knee, or two.

The kiss was unrequited,
chased by abraded skin as the
sensation melted, into droplets.
In accord, the kite, (ruby as the knees)
had a broken thread,
and the wind began to blow.

Innocent sighs plead a return
as glistening eyes, peer high,
and see red upon a branch.
A dainty tickle with laces; tied,
and a stretch to the leaves,
sees the wind hush a smile.

Ashen shoes with
buttercup laces; neatly tied.
In a skip with a tight grip
and a tattered, cherished, kite.
Mother's hand gave a touch
and kissed the kite, in glee.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Silver, beautiful penned you potray here, simply within every stanza, but writing well with beautiful ended... "loving life with dreams replete, for the souls combined, yet still, How sudden ended and complete......"

    have a great day, best wishes from west... bert ~

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Yeah this poem was great it is calm and the words you use was amazing
    it keeps the reader to continue reading by those words you used and yeah this is beautiful

    great job

    geneross

  • 17 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    This poems wasn't too longm in fact the soft descriptions present such a calm feeling which continues to stay with the reader. It was beautifully penned, with great visuals presented by your words.

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