Lost in this world

by Skye   Sep 18, 2006


Lost in this world,
not a soul to care,
forgotten by those who said they'd always be here,
my heart is dead,
I've pushed love away,
love is what killed me that cold windy day,
forgetting what its like to be truly alive,
forgetting what it was like before my smile became a lie,
and trying to remember how I felt before I died.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ajda

    Great work the line "forgetting what it was like before my smile became a lie,' really stands out

  • 17 years ago

    by ellewen

    I love it~ But I have a little advice. On the third line down, I think the word here, should be changed to there because it rhymes more and it still makes sense. Just a little thing I would suggest. I still give it a 5!

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