Wow.. that was very good. I liked the emotion and depth. The different language was interesting. =0

Very harsh poem... and alot of feelings put into it. Really dont think the spanish fits in very well either...other wise 4/5

Woww.....very angry. I like it..
5/5. you need to talk pm me via email.
i dont have myspace
xox

Ally

That was nice I can sense the emotion put into it...but its just like some random stuff you would shout while your angry...no offense

This poem fell behinf in the quality you used in your other poems. I didnt really catch the flow and i noticed a few spelling errors:
"with our dam lifes"
i think you mean "with our damn lives"
i think it sounded a bit too like a paper informing us about HIV rather than a poem, but it could all be fixed..i hope you dont take this personally, cause ur other poems were way better:):)

Wow... a strong poem, on a real strong subject... well done!!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

Dude im impressed with the topic. And it held a strong emotion and argument in your poem very good. Keep it up!
^_^

This is another strong emotional poem I like it!!

Thanks for your c/r
-Josiah