To Late To Save Me

by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-   Sep 21, 2006


I writing this from heaven
Living a better life
But this is what happened
When I was alive

Mummy used to hate me
Daddy used to beat me to the floor
Mummy used to laugh at me
When daddy put my head right through the door

Mummy used to tell me
That I was just a mistake
Daddy told me not to tell
When he made all my bones break

Daddy told me he didnt love me
He told me he wanted me to die
But even though I could hear these things
I never ever cried

Mummy never tucked me in
Or read me a story before I went to bed
She only ever told me that she hated me
Hoping to be messing with my head

But my mummy and my Daddy
didnt count on me being so strong
on me blocking out all their words,
on me surviving for so long

I guess that they got sick of me
Blocking out their hate
Because I dont know what I did that day
But I secured my painful fate

Daddy beat and broke me
I was crippled with my fear
I swear I saw my mummy
Wipe away a tear

I whispered mummy I love you
While I was dying on the floor
Mummy looked back at me and said
I dont love you any more

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  • 15 years ago

    by AnCi

    Wooooow!! excellent poem! it is really sad.. but what's even more sad is that thise things are happening in our society today =(

    but really good job on the poem!! keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by alim

    This is so sad.

    but really good:]

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Daniel R Rodriguez is the star of my eye i love him so much

    I liked it i can feel the same way it use 2 happen 2 me?

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    That poem was really sad. It was beautifully written tho! GR8 JOB!

  • 16 years ago

    by The WriTer

    This poem is so good, im almost in tears. i really felt the emotion come through. i loved the way u used: mummy, rather than mommy. because (to me) it shows that this child is still very young and innocent and is going through all this shit. loved it, no mistakes or errors. can u say: JEALous
    -The Writer

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