Lost

Very nicely written. I love this poem. 5/5 for you. And thanks for your comment. God will keep you both together and I pray that he will love you forever.

I mean 5/5

Letty

The concept of this poem was great. But you started the poem off as speaking of the person then toward the ending you started speaking to the person. I think that you might want to choose one way of writing it either your going to be speaking of him or speaking to him. Other then that mild mistake I say that you have a excellent poem. 4/5

I like it. short, sweet, and to the point. I think the title could have been different. But hey thats just me. Good job.