Trapped

by Brittany C   Sep 23, 2006


I am trapped in a dark abyss.
Trapped in the shadows of others.
Trapped in a cold void,
Neither alive nor dead.
But trapped somewhere in between.
Trapped never to make anything of my self.
But to always be in the shadows of others..
Trapped forever,
Crused to live out the rest of my life alone,
Trapped.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    Another great poem, full of emotions for sure 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    I always say, the shorter the poem, the stronger it should be, and you nailed it! VERY GOOD! *gives you a cookie* VERY GOOD! ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Riz

    This should be in the dark section. Man, this is a really dark poem and this is the first one that hit me so hard, my shoulders and legs are heavy. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    This one was interesting and seemed more freestyle then any of the others. *5/5*

    Alyson

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    This one was very sad and it my type of poetry. It was very discritpive, though I thought that it could have been longer. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

    Alyson

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