Please forever

by brianna   Sep 24, 2006


I saw you the other day,
we met eyes and looked down.
the once great smile i had,
sadly turned into a frown.
she doesnt love you,
as much as i still do.
she doesnt see,
all of your true colors that can shine through.
i need to be your one,
you\'re the only one i\'ve had.
how else otherwise,
would you make me so glad.
i love so much that i am weak at the knees,
oh come back, oh would you, oh please.
nothing ever will replace you,
these words are so pure.
dont stop loving me,
i\'ll die without you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I love this poem! it's really quite great! you did an excellent job! I'm amazed at how great of a writer you are

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This deserves a 5/5!!! great poem!!!

    Bryan,

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Great poem, very well written,

    and welcome back to our club, it is so nice you to have you in
    Academy of world wide poets. take care

  • 17 years ago

    by .::Lovely*Letdown::.

    C-U-T-E. that basically sums it all up. xo.

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Nice write. I think, personally, that it didn't quite flow as well as it could have, but the ideas and emotions that it evoked were quite nice. :)

    4/5

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