What they do

by Brittany C   Sep 26, 2006


They knock me down every day
knowing naught what they do to me,
Every day it is the same, they punish me,
It has come to seem that no one cares,

They never pay my feelings any heed,
never giving me a chance,
never listening to what I have to say,
It is not fair the way that they treat me,

It is not right, then they go and talk
About people behind their backs,
Even when they're right next to them,
Sometimes I just really want to slap them.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Apart from changes and suggestions given ^
    There isn't much left to say, I like the determination in this and the strength too,
    Poem wise I thought it flowed okay and you did a good job
    xxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    Fair, Very confusing, and I have no idea what you were talking about.

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    It is not fare,
    Fare =fair
    The last word any ways=anyways

    Other than that this was really good well written, great flow, nice show of emtion truly am excellent read. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    But I was able to see the message.. though.. good job and keep up the work

  • 16 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    Sorry, but this poem didn't really flow.. it didnt sound good to me.. I know you have the potential to fix that.. I could tell by reading you other poems.. you have talent.. but I just didnt see any emotions though.. nice try ..

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