CUTZ

by Katlyn   Sep 28, 2006


Slicing up her pretty skin
She just wanted to fit in
She wanted to see how it would be
"I just wanted to be accepted for me" she though as that razor cut away
She never could really see
How hurt she could really be
A cut here a gash there
As her arm covered in scars
Blood drips on the floor
And she looks at it just once more
She says this will be the very last time
But inside she knows it is all just lies
She she wipped the floor
And goes to bed
And just waits for life
To start over again
Until next time
Her feelings are hurt
And she turns
To that silver blade
And starts to cut
It feels like she is caught in a rut
She is never free
From the burden of her desteny
"Life will get better, hopefully" she thinks
Before she drifts off to sleep

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    A very dreamy ending, almost like drifting off to sleep which is kind of true in a way.

    "Slicing up her pretty skin"

    Now THAT was a good opening. It almost contradicts itself.
    Well done!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by The Black Rose

    It's really good...
    and i know what u're talking about, i know what razorcutz feel like but just like you said: Life will be better...

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Amber Parker

    This is another really good poem. It's dark and sad, but very catching, if that makes any sense.

    ~Scarlett