Looking for a way out

by Jose Delapaz   Sep 28, 2006


Just like my heart
kept in the dark
It began by a fall
now I'm surrounded by this walls
looking for a door
cause I can't take it no more
I want to be free again
in a place were there is no pain

Looking for a way out
thats all I think about
to be able to fly away
and that will be the day
cause I'm trying to let it go
this pain that got me cold
No one to brake the spell
no doctor to get me well
there is no cure for me to believe
cause I lost the will to live

Last time to hear my voice
cause death is my only choice
I found what was looking for
the key to open the door
leaving my past behind
and nothing would change my mind
having no regret
but it feels good to forget

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  • 16 years ago

    by SamanthaRose X3

    This was really good, I can relate.

    Thanks for the poem comment.

  • 17 years ago

    by luna bella

    Wow this is xtremely good it catches just the right emotions, this is how i feel most of the time ................ i love love all of your poems

  • Woow lots of emotionin this one i like it

  • 17 years ago

    by Kathleen

    Thats pretty much me right now...
    my past my present and my future...
    relief is just a slash away...
    good poem...

    • 9 years ago

      by Jose Delapaz

      Thanks Kathleen!! Hope u also find your way out..take care.....

  • 17 years ago

    by Poison Ivy

    I could envision your pain with this poem.i can relate..excellent job!