He helped her find love

by Brittany C   Sep 28, 2006


Day by day,
Night by night,
She try to find her way,
To break free from the pain,

Then he came,
And he looked at her,
And she would see,
What she's been looking for,
She was lost,
But is lost no more,

Then he would look at her,
And she could see,
Just what she's been looking for so long,
She had been lost as you could possible be,
Till he took her hand,
And told her what she had been waiting for,
And she would never be lost again,

And he would say,
She is the reason he loves life so much,
And though she had been so lost,
She's finely found the love,
She had been searching for so long.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Full of heartfelt emtions, I like that. I think you did another excellent job, Your better upbeat, tahn you are sad.

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Love is really hard to find but when u find it you'll know u have it excellent poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    This is much better. It has a very lyrical feel, and I imagine there was probably some music in the background that means something personal to you, when you wrote this.

    From what I've read of your work you do "upbeat" much much better than you do "sad". Encore! Encore!

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Like Goran says great poem and full of emotion, and i Notice that you dont prefer the rhyme, even though I dont care about it coz I made poems with and without that just a few thing that is inportant for a great poem is a rhythm
    But then this one is good just put a little more rhythm to make the feelings more effective

    geneross

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Nice poem, very well written and full of true emotions, 5/5 from me.
    keep up the great job

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