I'm tired of hearing Cupid's lies,
bringing nothing but tears from my eyes.
Tired of all his tricks he likes to play,
like what he told me that dreadful day.
Told me I loved her more than life,
told me to ask her to be my wife.
But it all came crashing down,
and now I lay here on this cursed ground.
Wondering if this pain will end,
pain when you said we are only friends.
Cupid's lies have finally got to me,
finally made me find what I didn't want to see.
That no matter what my feelings are for you,
you will never feel the same way too.
I want the flow,, love it! just continue writing all what u feel and i keep on reading hehe.. well honestly i love the way how u write a poem.. seems u have a great imagery and very talented person,,lines are very clear and i think the rhyme was good too.. keep it upt 5/5