Circular Breathing

by Twisted Heart   Oct 1, 2006


Tap...Tap...Tap...
The rain dances on the tin
Across the darkened sky it flies
Seeking refuge from within.

A simple tip of water
From the clouds that wandered by
Hoping to give earth a drink
With it's sweet lullaby.

Sinking in the meadow
To a daisy there at play
Who opens up its petals
And reap what God has made.

A honey bee so hard at work
Gathers nectar from it's bud
And flies into the raindrops
With a courageous love.

Up to the heavens it takes wing
To drop its sweet perfume
Upon the very clouds that tipped
The water from the moon.

Tap...Tap...Tap...
The drops are heard, then seen
Like lively little dancers
Taking time to breathe.

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  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Beautiful imagery, another amazing work. 5/5

    -Luna-

  • 17 years ago

    by sibyllene

    Aw... i liked this. good rhyming, but more than that, cool ideas! "..that tipped the water fromt he moon..." i don't know if i remember that phrase exactly, but i liked it. and for some reason, the "courageous love" of the honey bee seemed to be the perfect phrase to use. good poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Very interesting. an unusual write but i liked it. Jpoet*