Pie #2

by Mark   Oct 2, 2006


I ate my pie and I became sad,
I wanted more which made me mad.
I went to the nearest baker and bought more pie,
I was so happy I was on a high.

When I ate it all I went back for more,
They had none left I started kicking and screaming and crying on the floor.
'I WANT MY PIE!' I said in an angry voice,
They got me another pie for me, they had no choice.

When I saw they had no more pie for me,
I was let down.. I got on one knee,
'Please, just one more pie' I said,
'If I don't get it, I might be dead!'

They baked me 10 more pies,
I just could not believe my eyes.
These were huge, I wanted them all right away,
This was by far my luckiest day.

I took them home and saved them for later,
It's all for me, not to cater!
I'll put them in my safe and eat them myself,
They're there safe, sitting on my shelf.

I love pie, I'll never stop loving it,
If you don't love it then you're just a twit.
Pie saved me and it saved many others,
Eat it up people, and force it to your little brothers.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Laurie Tran

    Haha awesome poem..
    i wrote a poem about chocolate chip cookies.. inspired by yur poem..haha

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Haha that was funny! my ex would've thought this quite funny as well, he always said pie... lol =]
    Ciao xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Christie

    Haha this made me laugh. =P great poem, i don't see many good happy ones around lately, but u've managed it. =D

    keep writing
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    HAHAHAHAHAHA! Mark-Man. I lurrrve pie. I ate some yesterday. ;P

    Gosh. We havn't talked in agessss. I've got sooo much to tell you. Wow!

    Anywho. This Second Pie poem was aweswome!! Keep it uppp!

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by catherine

    That's so cool. Love the rhyming.