by XxbrokenXsoulxX Oct 3, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Look left see the bullets, |
by Void
Hey. Really sad poem, but you described the tauntingness that can be quite well. I like the personification you gave the bullets, it really shows alot more emotion, emotion in your poem as well as brought out emotion in your reader. Nice job. :) |