Nothing left

by XxbrokenXsoulxX   Oct 3, 2006


Look left see the bullets,
Bullets wrapped in a bottle,
They haunt you while you're crying,
They stare into your soul,
They embrace your secret wish of dying,
They whisper in your ear,
"This could be the end,
The end of all of your misery,"
Losing everything you loved,
Losing everything that kept you alive,
They're growing evermore alluring,
The balance they're supposed to cause,
Has turned against you,
They're always tempting you,
Your will is fading fast,
Your excuses are running thin,
You've taken their final poisonous whisper,
And turned it into your action,
Write your goodbyes on this final piece of paper,
There's no turning back now,
You've got nothing left in this life to live for,
Its all brought you down.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Hey. Really sad poem, but you described the tauntingness that can be quite well. I like the personification you gave the bullets, it really shows alot more emotion, emotion in your poem as well as brought out emotion in your reader. Nice job. :)