Falling apart

by Rin   Oct 3, 2006


What can you do?
what can you say?
when it is hits you so fast?
when your falling apart
loosing control
can't feel your legs cant feel your head
what happens now ?
who loves you so, they can help pick you up
when your
falling apart
loosing control
when you have now clue
what your doing
your head is spinning
your crashing down
who will pick you up
when your falling apart
and..
loosing... control-

~rin~
OK yeah that was a little tune I picked up today when I was sitting on the ground crying so bare with me on the stupidity

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow..thts a awsome tune!! i lik it alot..

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Awww this is really sad, but its also really good. i like it a lot =] its defiantly not stupid! you did a wonderful job writing this. keep it up 5/5