Give up

by damaged rose   Oct 3, 2006


She gave up
&& finally gave up.
she dropped the fake smile
as a tear ran down her cheek.
she whispered to herself;
i cant take this anymore..

.x.farhaghouse.x.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    I can't find the words to describe how this poem makes me feel. It's perfectly written.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ninz

    I really like this poem! i can "feel" the poem coz i feel like this.. it's nice. keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    The honesty can be too much.

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