My World

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Oct 6, 2006


My World

You became my smile
My laughter
My sun
My green grass
That has longed to grow
You became my everything
My whole world
I would've never thought
Of opening another door
To another love
But I saw something in you
That made me believe
That I need to try again
To be able to move on from my last heartbreak
And that you wouldnt let me break
Like glass to the floor
Like many others have
I know theres still some pieces on the floor
But the peices that creates
My personality
My dreams
My wishes
My heart
Was helped glued back together by you
You became my music
My heartbeat
My structure
My romance novel
That I cant get enough of
You became my everything
My whole world

**I've attempted alot to try to write love poems. So far I think I'm doing good. So yea this is a new start in love poems for me!**

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I really like this. It kind of reminds me of something I'm going through right now and you did an amazing job at capturing the moment. Great job on this.. You've got a wonderful way with words! I can't wait to read more! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    That was a good poem. it was unique. i liked the emotion you put in it. u might want to add a bit more punctuation though. just a suggestion. overall a great love poem! 5/5