Dear Diary,

by SilenceBreaksTheHeart   Oct 6, 2006


Dear diary,
I'm not sure where to start,
so I'll just spill my heart.
I feel I'm falling apart,
I've made sorrow it's own art.

I'm suffering from heart break,
I can feel my very soul ache.
yeah Diary, I've been wearing a smile that's fake,
as I try to figure out my mistake.

This sorrow I've never felt before,
cause my babe don't want me anymore.
I'm just gonna close the door
and let my blood and tears mix on the floor.

When people look I run and hide.
Their every look eats at my pride.
But they don't see my other side
or my thoughts of suicide.

I tried so hard to be the best,
to fill everyone's request.
No one knows I'm so depressed,
so with a blade I lay my pain to rest.

Oh Diary will you help me please,
help me get up off my knees.
Please help the pain to ease.
Depression is my sad disease.

No one suspects how much I cry.
They don't know I want to die.
Dear Diary, can you tell me why?
Dear Diary, this is my goodbye.

Thank you my Diary for listening to me.
If only everyone could see.
No one else heard my plea,
so now to heaven I will flea.

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  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    Beautiful poem...very well written...Also very easy for me to relate to, my own are also more or less about this, too...(though they are not that good as yours...)
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by Colby

    Very good job i liked iti 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Great work!
    There was alote of emotion put into this poem!
    I loved it!
    Hope you feel better soon!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Andi

    I loved this poem; i can totally relate since i have cut myself before and have also had depressed thoughts. don't commit suicide, its not worth it 2 end your life. if u could comment on my work i'd really appreciate it
    andi

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I think it was really cool how every line in each stanza rhymed. That is so hard for me to do. And it really got me into it....about half way through the poem I was almost yelling at you to talk yourself out of it! lol, and I loved the line

    I'm just gonna close the door
    and let my blood and tears mix on the floor.

    I thought it was beautifully penned, and it brought a greatly sad picture to mind. Great job!
    ~Jules

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