Awesome poem! v,very, emotional, i like it!

Beautifully written! i loved it :) Great Job 5/5

~[AnotherDream]~

Wow. Amazing write. The repetition "And I wasn't even his" added a lovely touch to your poem. Beautiful flow and words.

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OMG! I loved this!! This is exactly how I felt/feel and stuff. I Loved this!!!!!!!!!!!! DFSDFD. Sorry, I just don't know what else to say. I loved it!!! 10000/5.

[[ Poetess ]]

Beatiful... I liked how you used repetition... Its really effective. A really good peace... Keep it up! xx

You need to write more "of these" ;). This is great, I thoroughly enjoyed it. You captured the moment perfectly in this poem. Seriously, write more, this is good.

"And I wasn't even his"
wow, a wonderful write, i see a tone of sadness in it, but written so greatly..
nothing less than a 5/5 from me.
keep up the great job

I liked it. It was one that I felt everyone could relate to, which means great writting!

Amazing! I can understand why so far you have gotten a 5/5 ... no rhyming i like rhyming... but yours didnt need it! Everything was perfect! I love the emotion i got from this.. simply amazing! fav stanza:
He pulled away and smiled
How I let him take full control, I don't know
But the butterflies distracted me,
And I wasn't even his.

5/5

M i too small to understand this?..co'z i cannot understand all..only half of them i can!!..

somone please explain!!..

Wow *tear drop* the poem is so unique and heartfelt. i truly understand what you are going for. keep it up, i like what im seeing.