If......

by *Daniel94*   Oct 8, 2006


If the ocean was prettier
the grass was greener.
the war was over
if the air was cleaner.

if roses were a darker shade
if the sky was a lighter blue,
if honey was any sweeter
and if politics were through.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ren

    Ooo! Very captivating! Please finish, and I will definitely read the rest! Very nice, you have a lot of talent my friend, I can see that in your wonderful poems. Keep writing, and I promise to keep reading!

    Much Love!

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Its incomplete but im haning to on the dots! i want to read more!!!!! Your poems are great keep writing :)) Paula was right :))

  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Ooooh. Pretty. O.o
    It's really good already- And i bet it'll be awesome when it's finished. ^_^

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