That most people

by oscar   Oct 8, 2006


Love is an emotion
that most people fake

promises are test of trust
that most people break

good advice are the special worlds
that most people cannot take

happiness is a simple joy
that most people cannot make

money is a deception
that most people cant for sake

life is like a crazy dream
from which most people never wake.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 14 years ago

    by Sadespair

    I love how simple it was, yet gives a great point across. write some more your really great.!.

  • 14 years ago

    by Loveless Dreamer

    Wow...got down to the truth. i loved it...5/5 great job

    *Val

  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    I liked how you rhymed every 2nd line together. it gave it a good sense of rhythm. so many simple truths were nicely and easily explained.

    well done

    one thing i did notice:
    "money is a deception
    that most people cant for sake"

    ^ the last lane. FORSAKE is one word.

    you should write some more poems,
    ~Ben

  • 17 years ago

    by Anna

    I like this its good i hope that u can read mine and tell me wut u think of them

    thanx,
    anna

Read All Comments (4)