Wow I Love the feeling here it is so sad and yeah this is your best poem I think and the feelings who overflow was great I feel those intensity and I can relate then

Great job
Geneross

WoW this poem was so excellent i like the emotion u put into it, i give u a 5/5

I once did the same thing in my past and I regret it til this day. I probly will never get over it. This poem reminds me of her, and I just wanted to say thanks for writing such a wonderful poem.

keep up the good work, I'll be reading some more of your stuff.

-Josiah

Thats a beautiful poem and i can so relate to it, keep on writing xxx

I love your poetry talent, you are a great writer. 5/5 from me........

Wow i can relate this poem very romantic and sweet poem... great words and great flow keep it up ur rigth this is one of the best poem u've write.. god bless 5/5

Good job : ). I think there are few things that you should try to improve. Your Vocabulary, secondly the flow of the poem, the lat stanza did not feel sooth enogh in sliding into the poem, perhaps you can try rephrasing it.

Very nice poem! well done!
You have put your emotions down beautifuly!
The rhyming was good, but it was abit cliche (too, you etc.)
It had a really good flow, i enjoyed reading it! well done!
I do agree with you, i think it definatly one of your best yet!

Keep it up!

5/5

~Murder.

Bravo... love this... i really felt the emotions you put into it... the rhyme was good and message was so true...

I know I broke your heart,
And I broke my own too.
But baby I just want you to know,
I will always love you!

this really hit me... i feel the same way... great job on the poem! keep writing!

~angel~

I realy liked to poem somthing like that happend to me a long time ago and i realy wish i would have know how it would have turned out in the end i give you 5/5

Beautiful poem/song, both ways! Love it, 5/5!

Beautiful and sad... great poem! keep it up.
-xXx-

I agree with you that this poem is your best, I love it, it's so true come to most relationships. I gave you a 5/5 Keep it up

Nice poem..Lm/
i liked the feeling and the emotion of the poem as a whole..
i like as well the concept...
and yes, it really is one of your best poems..
you have just reached out the hearts of millions of gurls out there who feel the same way too about their past relationships...keep up the good work

.::sW8haRtbrEakER::.

Beautiful Piece!

Simply Amazing! How can someone not give you a perfect 5/5? Your rhyming fit in perfectly... and the flow and beat the poem was excellent my favorite stanza is:
I miss being with you,
My wrists just keep bleeding.
I wish you were still here,
To keep my heart beating

Wow, i almost crtied when reading this, i can relate and so many times i've tried to get that feeling down but haven't been able to, you captured what i wanted to say perfectly, and the poem was excellent. 5/5

Wow... that was a really good poem...so tell me, how do u get past that? cuz i cant figure that out... but if u do plz do me a favor and let me no... keep up the great writing!

Hey, this is a really nice poem...it truely touched my heart!! keep up the great writing..

Wow i feel this way right now beautiful poem.5/5