Again, i thought it was sweet. you have a lot of talent.

I can REALLY relate to this poem, it helps to see someone write about what you feel! at least it helps me to know that im not the only one with a broken heart... anyway, i really loved your poem. it mean a lot to mee.
5/5
i hope to see more of your work soon enough(sp!)
take care..
luv,
haya 3gab

Wow i loved this poem...i can really relate to this poem right now....5/5

Awwww, this is such a cute poem..its sad and happy a the same time!!! keep up the great writing!! =]

I can relate to this so much, as i'm sure many others could too. You conveyed your emotions very well, i thought it was really sweet. Nice write. =] 5/5

Yeah i liked this, i have had experience of this happening to me

Lots of emotion here... I think everyone has felt these feelings at some point in life .... Very well written & a very good emotional poem! 5/5

Sad, but I still liked it. Again very too-the-point. You stuck strictly to the meaning, and it turned out well. Nice work!

This is so true in my life write now i really like it
im gonna read a few more of your poems but if i dont comment sorry haha im lazy keep writing i want to hear many more from you

Awwwwee...
That's all I have to say.
Awee. :[

Aww it was so sad. =( And it sounded like me lol. This sounds like it came straight from the heart. You have feelings for this person, but he doesn't have them back. =(

The flow was wonderful. I just read it off the tip of my tongue, it was so smooth. The imagery was great. I really liked how much emotion you put into it to make it sound better than it may appear lol. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Great job!

Wow amazing job on this. i can relate to the words you wrote. it's so very well written. 5/5