Mixed up world

by robin milford   Oct 10, 2006


The line between pain/pleasure
is very thin it sometimes overlaps
thats when pain is good
pleasure is bad
wrong is right right is wrong
But right is always might
night is day day is night
shut out the light
The worlds turned upside down
with no one to turn it right

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  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    Great poem not as good as that other one i read but this is still good in its own way i liked it:D:D and thanks for the comment on "insanity"

    keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by Brigitte

    Ohhh, very interesting write. I like how you seem to confuse the reader, but in a good kind of confusing way. The flow was nice, and although there was a bit of a forced rhyming in a place or two, it was a really nice read. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BehindThisSmilex

    I really like this poem
    it says a lot

    p.s thanks for the comment

  • 17 years ago

    by Jackielynn

    Love it

  • 17 years ago

    by StMario

    You express yourself with great emotions... it seem to realistic, because of how your spit it out.