When You Left

by BSV   Oct 11, 2006


When it hit
It hit me hard
All my love fell
With no disregards
When you left
Hard to believe
You took all
My dreams
I cant believe
You did this to me
I thought you knew
What you mean to me
But it is to late
Your to far gone
You didn't look back
Or even slow down.... :(

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  • 17 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    It's really sad, and everyone can relate to it... Good job! I've decided I'm your mentor... :):) I just want you to do something for me, b/c I think you'd do it really well!! Write a poem using repetition!! Don't know what I mean about repetition? Skim my poem, "One of Many Lessons From Marshall". I just wanna see what you can do!!
    PV
    Sorry it seems like I'm on your back, but it's good for developing your skills!

  • 17 years ago

    by xxbabigrrlxx

    OMG!!!!!! that was SO sad....*tear tear* :'(....but the poem was GREAT!!!!....5/5....and if this poem is expressing something that happened to u in real life...then just know that there are ALWAYS more fish in the sea...and that she just wasn't ur nemo...sorry kindda corny but..yea LOL

    *~*xxBaBi_GrrLxx*~*

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