Depression

by Whitey   Oct 11, 2006


Gnashing, rotting teeth, gnawing all hope,
Gaping, dark mouth swallows my strength.
Odorous heat brings red blush to my face;
Words become stinging whips in this place.
No measure may be made of its length,
For time is lost on this slimy slope.

Worms of doubt now inhabit my mind,
Leaving in passing decomposed light.
Whispers come to my ear, bringing fear,
Loosing my grasp on sanity so dear.
My only thought becomes my swift flight,
Running, even though I am quite blind.

In this hell there is but selfishness,
Sullenly stealing Gods greatest gift.
All grace hidden from my dim sight,
Unable to lead me home by its light,
I am left like chaff that the winds sift,
Until loves hand offers forgiveness.

Gently taking away all shame.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    Whitey,this is excellent it shows the emotions that come with depression very well. you are a very talented writer.

  • 17 years ago

    by ~me~

    Wow i really do think this poem is amazing, its really good and the words are really powerfull, keep writing because your really good
    5/5
    me xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Wow, that was amazing. It had awesome images in it and it was very well written. Read over the last stanza though, becase P&Q automatically change a few things and your words have the symbols in them. BUt it was a really good poem. I really liked the ending. Keep it up. 5/5 =]

    -Jenna.