You captured the emotions of that poor lion very well, you deserved the 5 i gave you xx

Awww, That's the first time I've read a poem about animal cruelty on this site I think. That was well done. And the end shows just how sad it is. Kinda makes you want to go save a lion doesn't it? I'm glad that I came across this poem because it's original, and I enjoy that alot. Not only is it original, but it's also got alot of feeling in it, and that in itself is well done. I have no complaints really... Good job:)

Beautiful penned you potray here, creative yet unique written, what else i can say here; "The earth could not be beautiful at dawn, The butterfly, those who love so much, May not be there at all... Some are cruel, some do not care." have a great day! best wishes, bert ~

Hmm this is the best poem of yours for me i think its pretty good and it written so well nice flow and very impressived love it 5/5

Very thought provoking write,
rhythm is so fluid..
short yet effective..

Most of us are held ccaptive by society and forced to jump through hoops, but does society care how we feel .. just my interpretation of this well written thought provoking poem

Nice poem. I can feel the sadness of the lion.

Aww, that is so sad. I've never read a poem on this topic, and i think its a good one. Very sad, i can feel the sadness of the lion. A wonderful write. =] 5/5

You have captured the other side of nature that we don't seem to think about often enough.
We see the beauty side most often and ignore the captive side.
Very eye opening poem, that surely opened MY eyes.
Thank-you for sharing !

I loved this poem, im glad to see that others care about animal cruelty aswell.Great job :)

Michelle x