Closing the Goddamn Door

by PS   Oct 14, 2006


I miss you, i want you but
go cry now, because its over
Im through, no more nonsense
I've found my sense, now I'm
closing the goddamn door

you loved me, did you care
lusting for my body, never giving
a moment to do more than stare
didnt care about my heart, nor
yours neither, no matter now, we're
closing the goddamn door

holding that archway open so long
arms getting lazy from trying so hard
said you noticed, said you loved
in reality you watched that one there
she got your love, caught your smile
never closing her goddamn door

came to me at night, fire all alight
passion in your pants, coming to me
she got your love, i got your f**k, but
now i'm through, ive found a real love
one who will watch me, worship me as i
close your goddamn door.

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  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Nice poem. it won 5th place in my contest. it was hard to judge but i decided that your poem deserved a placing. great work. keep up your skill.

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    I really liked this style used for this write. I alway find it difficult to write in this style with the same ending for each stanza...but yu have demonstrated here that it can be done with a great flow and packed with emotion! Very well done, very enjoyable read.