BANG

by clint   Oct 15, 2006


Are we moving too fast, are we moving too slow, do you still love me i just want to know

Through thick and thin our love will grow , only with time will we really know

I tried to kiss you and you pulled away, it just makes me want to blow my self away

It makes me think "does she really love me", or does she just say that because she doesn't want to hurt me

Now the guns to my head and i wonder if she will cry, when she wakes up tomorrow and finds out I'm dead

Now i pull the trigger BANG I'm dead, blood splatters on the ceiling as i fall on my bed

Now I'm just another case of love gone bad, it makes people think about the life i could have had

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  • 19 years ago

    by Peachez612

    AWWWW dat poem was soo sad. Dat was a goodpoem though Clint! It was sad! Great job Clint! Have you shown dis' poem to anyone? You should!

  • 19 years ago

    by clint

    Thanks to all for reading my first poem.
    im not really suicidal it was just a really bad weekend

  • 19 years ago

    by robin milford

    Hi clint i read your poem iti s good i hope that u would never do what your creactor did life is presise keep writting

  • Its good, but can be written better. I liked it tho, 4/5