My Attempt

by becky   Oct 17, 2006


I wrote a ditty
thought it was pretty good

It rhymed in all the right places
just like it should

I wrote of love
of Friends lost

I dealt with life
& all it cost

But did you like it?
heck no!

You told me it stunk
& I should go

I thought you'd love me
pouring out my heart

I guess I should of
just lit my fart

Won't try again
to draw your eye in this a way

NO MORE POETRY
I'll write today

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    Crude, but amusing.Some just don't appreciate the arts-screw them!Excellent rhyme and flow here, even though it is satirical.

    Gary Jurechka

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