UNTiTLED .

by BrokenREALiTy   Oct 18, 2006


My heart is beating,
Ticking like a clock.
It starts to beat faster,
Then comes to a stop.

And so does the world,
As everything just disappears.
You're standing right in front of me,
And I'm standing there in tears.

But you walk right by,
As if I'm not even there.
I'm falling so deep,
Why don't you care?

Your friends walk by with smirks,
And my knees begin to grow weak.
I try to let out my voice,
But it refuses to speak.

I attempt to talk to you,
But all that comes out is silence.
The atmosphere between us,
It always seems so dense.

Walking by you,
With my head down low.
I can't rush these feelings,
Gotta take it slow.

With my heart whimpering,
And my tears without a voice.
I just gotta deal with the heartbreak,
Not like I have a choice.

When a girl falls in love,
She can't control her heart.
But you have the power,
To love her, or tear her apart.
[c] 2O06 Mindy Huang

I wrote it during class while I was half-asleep during first period x) So yeah, I'll edit it later. Any feedback, comments?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Nicole

    Well written

  • 17 years ago

    by kayla T

    This is really good ! keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    Very well written!! i love this poem! its awesome + has great emtions!! keep it up!!

    _Mya_

  • 17 years ago

    by my blue eyes cry

    Great poem i loved it... my favorite part is the last part!

  • 17 years ago

    by Rania

    This is soooo very true,if you read if from you heart...When a girl falls in love,
    She can't control her heart.
    But you have the power,
    To love her, or tear her apart...EXCELLENT part of this if people would just read it.NOT add anything just READ it for what it says ..

    Rania