Fed up

This is a great poem wonderfully done thanks for the comment;) lol

keenan

I liked this poem. you coudve probably expanded upon it. but the shortness was good. the third line could be fixed though. it isn't good for the structure.

overall it is good.

that is all. <3

A little short but meaning from the begining to end i liked the flow especially those

for what just the thought that I've helped someone.
For i know most of the time
I won't be appreciated at all.

keep it up