Heartbreak

by robin milford   Oct 20, 2006


With out you I am lost
blowing in the wind with no direction
no destination in sight
my head is all muddled
with thoughts of you
I am spinning out of control
spiraling down hill
my heart aches as it breaks
with each day your away
it creaks more
till finally it falls apart
and I'll be no more

I wrote this for my kids after they were removed from my care

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  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Beautiful is really all I can say 2 discribe this poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Wonderful peom though i think it is kinda sad to be in the love section lol but great poem i hope you have gotten your kids back you seem too looovvveeee them tons tons tons i dont see why they would have been taken away:S but great poem

    keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    Wow very good!!! and inspiring!! i like this poem a lot has great emotions! well written!! =]]

  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is so sad-as a love poem and poem of loss.It really brought the emotion out in my heart.I know this feeling under different circumstances-but the pain and loss are still there.Hang in there though, things change, things get better.

    Peace, Poetry, & Power,

    Gary Jurechka