Giving In

by Becky   Oct 20, 2006


My eyes gleam
With unshed
Tears
do you see them?

My Lips Strain
With Unvoiced
Screams

can you hear them?

My Body Trembles
With Unexplained
Emotions

do yo feel them?

My Mind Quivers
With Untold
Pain

can you see it?

I Shut down
I give
I quit
You Win

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  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Do yo feel them?

    [ I think you meant "you" ]

    Very sad poem, but the way you've structured it really made me like it. It was great! Keep it up!

    Natalie``

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