Tears like rain

by xxmichaelxx   Oct 24, 2006


(these tears like rain won't come again
today i promise it will stop to an end)

you promised you'll never want to see me cry
but what are these things coming out from my eyes
stuff your mouth with your own damn lies
I'm tired and sick thinking, i want to badly die

you can go ahead and break it more
just like how you did, what happened before
how you closed the relationship's door
how you made my heart hurt and sore

you promised and told me, you'll always be here
and how you'll be right by my side and always be near
that there's never going to be ever tears
how you told me I'll always be your dear

you just lied to me and make the rain fall down
when my smiles and laughter comes to a frown
making me fall right on the ground
forever you'll promise you'll never be around

so I'll stop with this nonsense you're making me crazy
someone hold me I'm falling, i feel a little dizzy
i hope I'll just never see you again, baby
and hope not to remember how you said "i love you" to me

(these tears like rain won't come again
today i promise it will stop to an end)

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Great job. My suggestions are review this poem and fix the flow. It was a little off throughout. The appearance of the poem would benefit if you capitalized the first word in each line. Also, try to expand your vocabulary, use less words to say the same thing. (A thesaurus always helps) Keep writing and I know you can improve! =D

    xxEvilAngelxx