While i write my song

by amy   Oct 24, 2006


You tell me it\'s my fault
you tell me in in the wrong
you tell me i don\'t belong here
so i sing this song
a song of disenchantment
a song of hatred lies
a song full of pain
which to my ears is no surprise
i\'ve been through hell
ive been back again
ive been in a storm
ive been drowned in rain
ive been shot out in the cold
so this is the story im told
it\'s my fault
im in nthe wrong
this is what im told while i wrote my song...

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  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I liked reading that.

  • 17 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    I think it is a good start, but there should be some capitalization, and spelling fixes (for exampl, the first line says in in, not im in). With some work itd be a lot better

    4/5

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