The Emotions of Love

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Oct 24, 2006


Fighting:
A rushing shadow dances over the lands, covering our love. What is this? Can it be? I do protest against something largely taking over our hearts! Fight, my love, for our love! Do not let God take away what is rightfully ours! Protest against the Creator, who gave us our love? Can it be? Do not let one simple Man tell us we can not love . . . Do not let this be.

Happiness:
A dashing light over takes the earth, splashing our love. What is this? Can it be? Do not protest so great a treasure! Reach out and give it a chance, give it our love. Let the Angels sing high praise and give us what is gratefully ours. Accept something from which we do not believe? Can it be? Let this light envolope us in its utter graciousness.

Love:
Describe love? What is this? Can it be? Do you wish to protest what is rightfully yours and wrongfully protest what is not yours? Describe love? Let God flower us with the temptations of trust, of faithfulnes. Is it our decision whether love is for us, or not? To take love for your own greedy pleasures? Can it be? Let us choose to love, for love is what we do! Yet, can it be . . .

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  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is great...i've havent really read anything like this before..its always nice to read something new..excellent!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow....
    One of the best free verse I have read in a long time...
    Absolutely brilliant.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    This is one of the best free verse i have read.i didnt see any ryming but it works! i also liked the structure and you had great word choice.i admire people that can write freeverse because i'm kinda bad at it lol but this one was really good! there is a couple grammar and spelling errors but no much. my favorite line was

    Let this light envolope us in its utter graciousness

    lots of love, kayla

  • 17 years ago

    by TeAr dROp

    I like how you do this!!!! it make me think about it!!! vrey nice...i think your really good keep up the good work!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by RAWR.

    YAY
    SUPERB!