I'm going now

by Keath   Oct 25, 2006


Kristal vein
Kristal sound
Drop dead
Never found

No word
No weep
Lying here
Forever asleep

Black clothes
Black rock
Dripping tears
Strong havoc

Cold death
Cold storm
Angels' cry
Claustrophobic form

All alone
All messed-up
None here
Final stop

Last kiss
Last dove
Eternal sleep
Goodbye love

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  • 19 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Short lines, but gets to the point fast, I like it. maybe you could've been a little more descriptive, but overall great job.

    Peace, Joe

  • 19 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Awwww. That was a very nice poem!
    Keep up the writing you're good at it!
    5/5 God Bless

    ~*tay*~

  • 19 years ago

    by LadyWaszky

    Havoc
    ^ cool word. =]

    I love this poem. its one you oculd read over and over and over and not get sick of it.
    i loved the short stanzas and your vocabulary, and metaphors. great job.

    x3 Lauren

  • 19 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    This was very creative. I like how you started the first two lines in each stanza with the same word. Short but sweet. I loved it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Wow! I really like this poem. It had short 2 word lines which i really liked becuase they were so meaningful. A great read! Keep it up! xx

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