I love this. I can relate so much to it. It's amazing.

Wow this is really good! I love the way you did the first 3 stanzas. Very different but really good. I can also relate to this poem in a way. 5/5

This is one of the best poems in the world, nice job.5/5

I wished I would have written this!! Lol. I envy you right now. This is exactly how i'm feeling. Rawr. Lol. This was amazing!!! Never stop writing...I hope everything gets better for youuu!! Take care!

Love,

- Poetess

Wow this was fantastic i really did love it truely though it was really good could you look at some of my poems and tell me how to become such a good writer like you xx alex xxx

Sarah dear, what a beautiful sad penned you potray here, so sad yet heartbreaking emotions, i agree with andrea; you are not alone with this deap pain of a broken heart... sometimes life's like a cloud, but i wish everything well with you sarah, stay strong, keep your head up high..take care.....bert ~

Sarah, this is truly amazing. I feel the hurt and the sorrow completely. It's kind of like you awakened something within me that I long thought was dead. This is a well done, heart breaking wirte

I love your expressions in this poem u seem to be really into it and that is what i like u were writing as the thoughts come to u and that is what a true poet always seem to do. so keep upi the good work and sorry about the tragic exeprience i knew i t hurt . but as girls we would at sometime get back up again so i hope u do the same .

Good Job

Wow, i thought that was amazing..i could see exactly what you felt in your words, and i had this splurge of emotions brought up by this poem...i loved the rhyming...Amazing poem!!5/5

Aww that's a really sad poem. It's good tho, so keep the good work up.

Grogeous
thats all I have to say

it was a beautiful poem
finally someone who writes wat I feel
it was so good words could not describe
i love it! it was completley awesome

and I really felt that
the words spreading through me
wow

^_^

This poem is so good it makes me speechless though i did come up with one word to describe it:
OUTSTANDING!!!!

There are many words that could be used to describe such a work, but there are times when less is more. Wonderful work, eloquent and heartfelt. There have all been times when we take the "rose" of love, and find not, but that there are only thorns there to be offered to us. A touching piece, 5/5

Best Wishes,
Luna

Woww that is extremely good. You can actually understand how you feel by just reading it.

Wow, This is really good!...i know how u feel, i can really relate 2 it...and i can tell how this very special piece is very close to you, keep going, u'll get far with your poems

I thought it was great. I noticed that the 2nd to last stanza was off in the rhyme but it just was all so good that it doesn't really matter. loved it!!! Jpoet*

This is so beautiful, u can really feel ur emotion as u write each word and it makes it so easy for me to relate to x

Very nicely done. You did an effective job with the repetitive style. The last stanza was amazing; my favorite. Keep it up

Great poem.. i related alot.. :'-(

Sarah,
I understand the whole lost love thing exept i was in love alone...well anyways it is apparent that your heart was in it and that is why this is such a good poem.

Keep on truckin' girl