WhY, Why Did ShE DiE ?

by JodieWatts   Mar 18, 2004


I catch the glint of light from the steel,
As my veins and wrist begins to feel,
The pointed edge go in,
I'm making up for my last sin,

I dig it deep and drag it down,
My face no longer with a frown,
I'm happy now repaid the blood,
But my heart pounds and thuds,

It should of stopped bleeding by now as my arm drowns red,
Feel faint so i lay upon my bed,
It's getting darker is this the end,
Isn't there anyway to fix or mend,

What have i done i have no chance to say goodbye,
Now everyone is asking questions like what when how where and the hardest question of all . . . WhY ?

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Washer

    I loved the poem. Your great with words. Keep it up and never stop writing.

  • 20 years ago

    by Tina

    That was so good Jodie!!!! I wish i had talent like you!!! I love your poems to much!!!! Keep it up and I'll keep reading and writing!

  • 20 years ago

    by JodieWatts

    thank u soooo much chris !!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Kevin McNulty

    loved the poem, the final thoughts of someone committing suicide, really has a sorry feel to it, K

  • 20 years ago

    by karima

    hi this was a brill poem! it really has feeling keep it up love karima