by JodieWatts Mar 18, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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I catch the glint of light from the steel, |
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I loved the poem. Your great with words. Keep it up and never stop writing. |
by Tina
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That was so good Jodie!!!! I wish i had talent like you!!! I love your poems to much!!!! Keep it up and I'll keep reading and writing! |
by JodieWatts
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thank u soooo much chris !!!! |
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loved the poem, the final thoughts of someone committing suicide, really has a sorry feel to it, K |
by karima
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hi this was a brill poem! it really has feeling keep it up love karima |