Me and my voices

by kyle orr   Oct 29, 2006


You yell and tell me to leave you alone,

then you say you don't want me near, but some day your gonna go away and

thats my biggest fear.

late at night i lay in bed, listening to the voices inside my head.

a voice says that you need me,

then another says your gonna leave me,

if your gonna go just do it I'm tired of waiting for you to prove it.

well if i would happen to let you go

then i would have not a single thing left,
but a shattered and broken heart

and a giant hole upon my chest.

you find it easy but i would say its hard

to mend a broken soul with out a debt card.

(C) Copyright 2006-forever-kyle c Orr

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  • 19 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    You have some very interesting pieces. I have one word of advice. Break your lines into shorter stanzas like this.

    You yell and tell me to leave you alone,
    then you say you don't want me near,
    but some day your gonna go away
    and that's my biggest fear.

    hope that helps....keep writing! Thanks for ur comments! Jpoet*

  • 19 years ago

    by superman15

    Very well expressed.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Aww this is a very well written poem, and i could feel your pain and fear for letting this person go, you captured the feelings very well. deffinatly a 5/5...
    if you have the time, please could you read and comment on my poems, thanks. Kirsty xx

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