I loved this poem, everything about it was amazing.. I felt it to be a very powerful love poem.. Excellent work.. well done 5/5 xx

5/5 that was fantastic, it flowed really well....keep it up :)

I really liked this. it had a lot of description and had great vocabulary! this made me want to cry cuz this really relates to me. i am NOT kidding!
i really loved it! 5/5 for me!!!

It sounds deep!!!!!!!!

This was beautiful. I enjoyed reading it very much. It painted a picture in my mind and made me want to keep reading. Great vocabulary and fantastic poem overall. Most deffinitly 5/5. Great work. :]

Chelsey

Its good great meaning,

PS please comment minez

Wow, amazing job. i loved the last line, it gave me goose bumps. 5/5

That was really good and i can kinda relate. keep up the good work! 5/5

Sounds like mae
great poem

Beautiful poem. I love it. The flow was wonderful, the rhyming was good, and the picture that you painted was beautiful. You have done an excellent job. Keep up the great work! 5/5

Best wishes
Letty

P.S. I apologize for my tardiness in commenting on your poems, but I have been so busy lately. So, instead of me commenting on four I will do five.

Sheena!! You're amazing!!I LOVE reading your poems they are all 5/5 or even a 10006416541/5!!! you're awesome keep it all up! *psst i got a new one ya can check out ;)*

Cool!!!...really touching and make me can feel what your saying...your really good keep up the good work!!!!

I love the flow and the rhyme scheme of this poem. To me, (you may this is wierd) this poem has this kind of "in a land far away" dreamy feel to it. But that's just my wierd way of explaining things :/
Anyways, I really enjoyed reading this poem. I hope to read more of your poetry soon!!

Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

I liked it and it seems like you put a lot of emotion into it. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

Great poem. I loved it. I really don't know what else to say. Other then that this is a beautiful poem.5/5

I believe this is onme fo the poems that were downvoted simply because it does not deserve lower than a 4.7 . this was beautifully written,. the flow was almost flawless(get there in a sec) and the rhymes were amazing.
the only thing that i belive makes it not a 5 is this line-Cannot, willnot, give up by cruel time - it seems to short compared to the line above it.
also the last line kind of bugged me, i didnt like the 'love of loves' but i guess i can't complain for one simple opinion like that.

Overall-Amazing. x3

Pretty poem.
Tragically wishing upon star stricken moons,

that line is amazing, the wording is really good.

Beautiful.
Just beautiful.
Everything was perfect.
The rhyming, flow, wording all worked really well together.

I love the wording u have used and like most of ur poems it flows perfectly keep writing and take care hun sarah x

Wow.. i really like this poem.. its soo cute .. its got nice rhyme.. good job!