Journey's End

I think theres a meaning here that is hidden but speaks out," though its hard to take" We sometimes get lost in the complexities of life but we "walk on" great poem 5/5 to me

Nicely done my friend. This sounds like a nice nursery rhyme, sort of like, when kids are playing with their friends, and their mom says it's time to go, but you're not quite done playing. Well, that's what this poem reminded me off. Good job!

Was this some type of form? Because you repeated some of the lines a few times. This was quite effective but some of them sounded a little off.. The imagery was better in this one. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Wow, joe, that was great! :) So much said in so few words. You're a phenominal writer. :)

Oooh, I like it!

it has a very serene feel to it.. much like a walk in the woods might.

"sole" should be "soul"

great work!