Loved it! And like they said you dropped the bomb at the end. :) You're an amazing writer, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

5/5 Great poem~ I loved it~ It had so much emtion of a heart achin.

WOW.
I Loved this!
The ending was really hard hitting, and although some of the imagery creeped me out, it was spectacular.
A Pleasure to read.

An excellent read!! Yeah the ending was really somthing. Very emotianal peace. The imagery was so cool! Good rhyming, and good flow. Keep it up! xx

Great poem! But I believe it should be in the Dark poems. I loved the imagery, the flow, and the rhyming was cool. I think that you did a wonderul job on this one. Keep up the good work. But you do need to put this in the Dark poems catagory. 5/5

Best wishes
Letty

Wow. This is something I've never seen before, and I have to say, as taken aback as I am - I loved it. It was different, imaginative, dark in a loving way (and that's one hell of an oxy-moron if you ask me...)
I can't complain over any of it. Usually I choose something to be picky about, but the meaning and depth of this one is far too astounding to have any other aspect of writing throw me off or point out it's own flaws. I'm not sure what inspired it, but this was definately an incredible write. I'm sorry I can't say much to help you fix it - but let it be known that it is only because I don't think you should change a thing. Excellent!

Very nice dark poem, good ending :)
well done
keep it up :)

Oooo very interesting. I enjoyed it very much. Very meaningful.

"(Of course this is all preplanned!)"
Sorry, I have a thing for brackets lately, they really seem to get my attention more than anything else...
But... THIS WAS SO GOOD! ^__^ Wonderfully written, I love your way with words. You also seem to have a thing for writing catchy poem titles, I notice. Nice.
5 from me.

I can find nothing wrong with this mysteririous dark poem, and I enjoyed reading it

HONESTLY..i dont really like this poem..but i dont really get it.. what does fondue have to do with anything and its kinda creepy.. i mean the structure is good but its just not my type of poem

Wow this was really good. one of the best poems i've read from you. so much emotion in it. defiantly one of my favs. keep it up! 5/5

~Kristina

This is new to me. Loved it. Amazing. Keep up the good work