Story about sad guy

by Alexander   Nov 3, 2006


Tears falls down
like rain healing broken guy
waiting in the dark side
to the angel to show him the way
to let him get out from the sadness to bring the happiness to his life
he thought he found the girl
who he is waiting for
he wanted to show her the feeling that he have inside him to show her what he was hiddeing what is inside his broken heart when he did it he just fall down more and more he just falls in the dark place more and more he will just sits and kill his self slowly and slowly he want to feel the pain inside him

i Wrote this poem about my sadness i just miss you baby i really do i hope you be happy :'( Broken heart will never heal

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mihaela

    I like a lot this poem because you managed to describe the same feelings I had in certain moments of my life.Congratulations,you have done a really good job,keep it up.Take care of you..5/5 for sure
    xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by The Unwritten Love

    Nice one .. good job ! :D .. keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Batman

    Who is this about?!?!?!

    ...~Sarah~

  • 17 years ago

    by ShAtTeReD HeArT

    Awe hun im so sry i didnt cause for this to happen n well theres no way really to make it any better cause i cant bet there for u... i wish so much to see u but its hard i cant leave my home and friends...and thats not cause u mean nothing to me...i cry every time i dont talk to u i wry alot about how u r...well anyways im sry i made u feel this way
    *fallen tears*
    zozo

  • 17 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    I really love the poem... u r a good writer.. keep it up

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