Broken promise

by ECILA ice   Nov 3, 2006


"Promise I'll always stay...
I'll be here for you forever"
The promise I live with everyday...

Pendulum swings
Calendar flies one by one
Silence is so deafening
Despair is on my hand
Crimson liquid drips from my wrist
Thinking you'll forbid the ache
Hoping you'll revive my lifeless spirit
But you just left me totally wreck
Clasping my last breath
Coldness is now embracing my soul
Waiting you to save me from death
But you didn't come at all...

"Promise I'll always stay...
I'll be here for you forever"
The promise I hold 'til my last day...

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  • 16 years ago

    by StormyStar

    OMG! i totally love this! its whicked good! ahh! lol i dont know what to say. i just can relate! keep it up! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Excellent poem, can really feel the emotions.. keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    Wow this is simply amazing!! i love the emotions and setup!!! great job!!!

    & thanx for the comment =o]

  • 17 years ago

    by Rona

    Great imagery! I love it! Your words are so deep and powerful. Excellent job! 5/5

    btw, thanks for reading, rating and commenting my poem! I really appreciate it =)

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